Notes from instructor:
This is solid writing. Your paper makes number of intriguing points related to the doctrine of double effect, and you are beginning to surface some interesting objections in response. This is a great start! For the next draft, focus on structuring your argument a bit more. You need to make sure that you have a clear thesis statement, and that you end each paragraph with a sentence that tells the reader what the significance of the paragraph is. That said, I think you’ve got a lot of solid content here, so it’s just going to be about working on your papers organization and structure.